Its looking good Elle! Only thing is you’re a bit too folded over in the hip key,
Which makes it a lot harder to get into an upright position for the salto. Think about folding as little as possible into the hip key, so it’s more of a lean rather than a full hip key. It’s all about the upper body being higher towards the sky than the hips in that position, and the legs being less piked. It may feel strange at first but it will be much easier to turn into the salto from there.