Manon,
Great job!
You can wrap the leg before or after the spin, doesn’t change the safety of it at all. I just prefer the way that I did in the tutorial, but def go with your preference.
In the prep at the top before you drop, your position is a bit too close to a salto prep therefore it’s dropping to a bit forward instead of sideways. Your head should be pointing to the ceiling and toes floor. Imagine there’s laser beams coming out of your head and toes. if it’s not ceiling and floor, adjust.
Widen the legs more…. those two things should make a huge difference:)